St. Fub-Bicaky

I posted a message earlier where I unsuccesfully posted a picture of one of my jerseys. I think I know hot to get you guys to see it. Ive made 3 jerseys, and this one, i think is pretty good, although its not THAT original.

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St. Fub-Bicaky

Oh, yeah. im open for judgment, please tell me what I can do to improve it.

CJ31

I like it, good work!, if you want a better chance at a reply thought you much wanna try posting in the Addons fourm instead of Newbie addons fourm.

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Its good

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Raven4986

I Like the color scheme

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St. Fub-Bicaky

You guys like it, but when i posted it in the addons discussion forum, all i got were replys sayin how it had all these mistakes.

Im not whinin or nothin, im just a little confused.

Earl

i don't remember seeing that posted before but it looks really good,i would add the shoulder logo to the other side as well though and maybe make it a little smaller.sweet job man keep it up

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Raven4986

the bottom reminds me of my sabres Inaug Fantasy that I never Released

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St. Fub-Bicaky

I got the inspiration for the bottom from the flames home jersey. It's in the addons discussion, but i think ill stay in the newbies section for awhile.:D Ill try to get an ingame to post

St. Fub-Bicaky

my bad, i meant to say i got the inspiration from a flames fantasy jersey i saw on some website. jersey xpress i think it was.

St. Fub-Bicaky

I tweaked it a little, and I just got an ingame, here it is.

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+note I ONLY did the shirt, and if you think the logo is a little deformed, it's only because it is being stretched during the shot. And personally, I think i should work on the collar, but i cant do collars.:D+

CrisGoCats

me too.....but not the design.......:p

sinnercain

They can be a little harsh there but take everything and put it to your jersey.... they do have valid points.. .

This is from seeing the ingame..(and I think a few were posted in the addon forum)

The red is too pale.
Brighter yellow in the piping (maybe match the logo?)
The black is a shade to light but not bad..
Try stealing the logos from the original jerseys using layers..(just erase the jersey 'cept for the logos)

I'm not big on the bottom but thats just me.. I'm not rippin' on ya.. I want to help.. give suggestions.. I know how frustrating it is starting out and no one wants to help a newbie.

Take what I say as stuff to improve your design not as just ripping it apart.. .:D

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TNK

The TORS itself looks great IMO. Keep it up!


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