Ok, so you have lowered your use of stitching. That's good. But you have somewhat random stitching here and there. For example, on the arms you may want to get rid of the random stitching lines and there's this weird thing below the armpits.
Minor thing: you may want to consider using McD's Edge mesh rather than the "Alternate Mesh" for the main part. And Edge jerseys no longer have the NHL crest at the bottom of the jerseys.
I say that you can still improve on your crests though. But the jersey making is improving
Fantasy jersey-wise, pretty good!