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10-12-2007, 11:53 PM
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Status: Project "Top Secret"
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Courtice, Ontario
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Volchenkov WIP
guys, anyone,
please lend a hand with some C&C. I've fallen off the horse of sorts, but i was having too much fun learning this craft so i'm back on it.
What's anyone's take on this one??????
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10-13-2007, 02:32 AM
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Status: Juniors
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Canada
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it looks good to me..but at the same time i kinda looks like someone dropped an anvil on his head..
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10-13-2007, 08:15 AM
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Status: Project "Top Secret"
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Courtice, Ontario
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Appreciate the comments...was kinda hoping for more. Is it possible that my other WIPs were SOOOOOO $h!t that now no one will even comment on a WIP that is WAYYYYYYY better then any of my previous ones? :/
The only way i'm going to get better at this is if i have people pointing out the shortcomings of my work. I will say this...i think i've FINALLY figured out the eye issue i was having before.
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10-13-2007, 12:58 PM
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Status: Cyberface Maker
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Quebec
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Really good! I would just say to move up the beard, becuz we don't see it. But its a nice progress!
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10-13-2007, 01:40 PM
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Status: AHL
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: Belleville, Ontario, Canada
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like i said on your other face..fix the lips..way too wide like on most faces.
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10-13-2007, 02:05 PM
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Status: www.thebreakaway.net
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Germany
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Can you please post the texture, too?
The face generally looks a bit too wide. Lips are okay, but they stretch so much because of the wideness of the model.
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10-14-2007, 01:00 AM
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Status: Project "Top Secret"
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Courtice, Ontario
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I don't really like posting the textures anymore if i don't have to. I have found that alot of people carve the crap outta your work even if it's a WIP. Personally, i think if it looks good in game then how you got it to look that way should be secondary. BUT, Marius knowing that your intentions are to help me in my quest to get better, i have no problem posting at your request 
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10-14-2007, 06:48 AM
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Status: www.thebreakaway.net
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Germany
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Actually, the texture looks VERY nice. I like the fact that you're learning so fast, you even made your own neck (a thing for what I needed years ;o).
The only thing that you could improve is the sharpness of the cyber in general. Maybe you can just sharpen it a bit up? But as I said, very nice otherwise. Keep it up man.
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10-14-2007, 11:46 AM
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Location: Maple, ON
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a very big improvement here 
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10-14-2007, 12:30 PM
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Status: Project "Top Secret"
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Courtice, Ontario
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Unorthadox
a very big improvement here |
Good enough to release or add to the project that i quit from lol? any input would be appreciated. thanx
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10-14-2007, 12:52 PM
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Status: Project "Top Secret"
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Location: Courtice, Ontario
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I sharpened it up quite a bit...wonder if it looks any better now? C&C appreciated
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10-14-2007, 12:56 PM
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Status: Mamoru Kusanagi
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Mallorca Island
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Nice progress Slomo!!!!
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10-14-2007, 01:42 PM
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Status: Project "Top Secret"
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Courtice, Ontario
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releasable?
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10-14-2007, 01:55 PM
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Status: Something goin' on..
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Lethbridge AB
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Last year, Doug asked me to make this cyber and I did, but I never released it. Yours, however, is better than the one I made. You're learning fast, great job!
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10-14-2007, 02:30 PM
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Status: Project "Top Secret"
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Courtice, Ontario
Posts: 624
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wow...that honestly is the best thing i've heard on these boards...cheers Brad
I guess with that, this can be added to the Cyber Project. And yes if it's ok, i'd like to be back on the project with the rest of y'all. Sounds like this one is complete :D WEEEEEEEE!!!!! :P
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